All Comments on 'Black Star'

I have not read the story through in its entirety, but, I know that Avril Lavign may go in this direction from first hand experience. She gave a concert at a Nightclub in Manhattan where I worked. I saw four black men going into her trailer on wheels when she was really drunk. Not to have something happen at our place, I took two additional bouncers with me to make sure all was ok. She was pretty much out and had already been half undressed and the guys were going to give here the business, passed out or near passed out or not. We got them out, her manager owes me big, but I lost his card. I am sure he will remember me if I called.

Tits are not bad, smaller and not the firmest judging from the droop. Did not take pictures, I am not that kind of person,

Has she got a tramp stamp? I know a few girls that regret theirs. If your wife's got one before you met her..well you best hope she's reformed. 5*

the comment that drew me to this. You're not kidding? Funny guy.

Seriously though?

This is an excellent story, well developed and detailed and told with real skill. Congratulations on a job well done.

this was actualy really romantic and well written, shame it's a porno and not something so... real. but you certainly know how to write, you and ghost both.

Black Star Ch. 1 is the start of an outstanding story. This chapter introduces the main characters very well. The introduction is carefully paced, and the plot develops steadily throughout, but is never rushed. Beautifully written, with a marvelous romantic atmosphere, this is another Five Stars work by one of the sites finest authors. Five stars.