by ancientviking
The story is too confusing and didnt flow well. Great potential from the writer, just too many non essential characters. Keep writing.. ..you have it
When did this site become non fiction? Relax haters, it is a made up story, it is fiction, it isn't real. If it doesn't turn you on, why are you reading it???
Golly Wally, I was going t say something but everything that could be said, has been said!
Gee Beav: You're right I'm speechless!
stomach racist garbage of this magnitude that advocates slavery. Offensive in the extreme.
I find it funny that a black man needs a white women to feel complete.