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All Comments on 'Blacked in Truck Stop Pt. 01'

by homewreckingpizzaboy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bad Read

Sorry, but this was a very bad read. The punctuatin is awful, and the storyline isn't credible at all, lacking any sense of eroticism or tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
re: Bad Read

Also, second person stories suck.

Flar1958Flar1958over 4 years ago
Wasted time

No introdution who is who confused writing! All about black offizer 10inch this to little for a story!

Try again maybe read other storys to look how they write.

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