by calmAndStrict
Great work, really enjoy the slower pace and small humiliating details. Excited to see where it goes
Great addition to the story. Would hope for a little more unwillingness and humiliation. Not sounding much like a blackmail type story.
Thank you to everyone that commented on the previous chapter. Please let me know if you have any suggestions as to how you would like this story to progress.
If I continue getting positive feedback I intend to update this story at least once per month.
Agreed this is wonderful pacing and how you're getting into her head about the commands, the names, the distractions. Keep it up. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Lovely story! Chapter 2 is even better than chapter 1. What is happening to Ana is exactly like what has happened to me - only in my case, it is just in my wildest fantasies. I'm watching for Chapter 3!!
I like the story next time she should be forced on her knees and give the delivery person a special a treat
Ana should make Andrea get her nipples pierced like the real slut she is,
can’t wait for more
@Dalmatian16
There are plans in place for that. Keep an eye on upcoming chapters.
amazing. Keep going. It remembers me of the classic "Owned teacher" story.
please go no with more degradation and submission of Ana
A previous reader compared this story to Owned Teacher, as I would compare it to Summer's Blackmail. Both are classics, but...neither had a satisfactory ending...or any ending for that matter. Not that I am rushing, because I hope it goes for many, many sizzling chapters, but please keep that in mind if you plan for immortality.
I like that word: sizzling. Why do F/f feel more intense than M/f? Excellent in all ways.
so far so good! Love the slowness of the scenes as well as the steady challenging Things Ana has to do. Hope the next chapter will be soon.
Pappasleaze!
This is very well written. The author has a very nice sense of pacing and the intelligence of the primary characters makes this a very enjoyable and totally believable story. The ease and competence of Andrea makes her extremely compelling.
If there was one thing that I would suggest with regard to a series like this...is the characters sound absolutely gorgeous. Right out of central casting. As much as this is an erotic story, it would be interesting if the women were perhaps a bit more relatable. Perhaps older or heavier? I believe this author is very capable of keeping us all off balance. I'm loving this series.