All Comments on 'Blackmailed Couple II Ch. 12'

Well, I'm glad to see the kids are out of the picture. And if I'm guessing correctly, Eydie and Annie will be meeting each other in the not too distant future. Nice work.

Grows and grows. Glad you are continuing this story.

not sure how to feel about anna and eddie mind control ... it seem like their original personality is completly gone. it feel like the main characters has been killed and remplaced with two new character.

I hope their original personality is still there and we will see anna and eddie back .

snorting coke. This chapter is just so ott with the "big plan" and all the scheming from powerful guys in "the organisation", and for what? Turning an ordinary couple into a porn bimbo whore and a fcked up sissifed guy, why would this all powerful organisation go to such bother??

You took a fairly brief tale from the original author and chapt by chapt have turned it into a ridiculously stupid story. You are clearly creative and write pretty well, so why not end this and write something fresh starting from your own point of origin.

Awesome Chapter i like where this is going. I love the Mind Control and the fact, that Anna is still around and observing. I wonder what she will think of Eydie. I can't wait for her to go to Vegas.

Keep up the nice work.

I'm so glad you continued this, always dying to continue reading. Waiting achingly for the next chapter! Love the development of eydie especially! X

Nicely done. I am wanting to read through this as fast as I can but also I want to take my time and slowly read it to truly savor each word.