All Comments on 'Blackmailed - Jenna's Money Pt. 04'

Get a good proof reader.

Lots of new stories today - all awful like this piece of trash.

Just went way off base. Matter of fact you just passed Pluto!! Your really going to have to focus to save this one. Please do better job proof reading.

Jenna's story line still ranks up there with smelling the air around a port a potty on a 95 degree day with a 70 degree dew point and no breeze.

Surprised by the very negative comments. OK the writing needs tidying up, but there are many that are much worse on Lit. The story is a fun little fantasy which makes an enjoyable read.