All Comments on 'Bleak Future'

by davion2308

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
well written and intriguing...

the story is well written and builds the suspense u were looking to build. your herione is also very interesting and i can't help but feel it was too short as i would love to read what happens next! great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
very nice!

interesting.Keep at it :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GREAT!

you can't just leave this hanging, gotta finish it! with a lot of chapters please

GomerbileGomerbilealmost 15 years ago
Loved It

Great story! Anxiously awaiting more

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
you got a winner

there is really not much to say but WOW

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I think you should have made it so you can continue this story it is very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more?

Will you write a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
the rest

I liked it. There were a few spelling errors, but i liked it. you did a good job. If it was filled out a little bit more and you had part 2 then 3 you could have a book easily. I would buy it and read it over and over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice Zombie yarn..

This reminded me alot of World War Z. Same realistic semi-documentary feeling.

Keep it up. wouldn't mind reading a second part.

Cold_Blooded_AngelCold_Blooded_Angelover 11 years ago

hey, please do another!! I loved it! xox

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow

This is good, I like Meredith's lack of sensivity.

The way it's written, we have to guess a lot to follow, it's great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great

Belivable and interesting story and setting. Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not bad.

Good start. It leads to a good storyline and follow up events. You should continue.

mrChristianmrChristianalmost 6 years ago
Not bad.

My last comment went as an anonymous. Dont wanna be labeled as a freeloader lol.

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There's not much to tell. I've been writing different works, serious and silly, erotic and political, for the past decade. I enjoy reading and writing and I think there is nothing greater then to connect mentally and intellectually with the people that read my work. If yo...