All Comments on 'Bleak Future'

by davion2308

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mrChristianmrChristianalmost 6 years ago
Not bad.

My last comment went as an anonymous. Dont wanna be labeled as a freeloader lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not bad.

Good start. It leads to a good storyline and follow up events. You should continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

Belivable and interesting story and setting. Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow

This is good, I like Meredith's lack of sensivity.

The way it's written, we have to guess a lot to follow, it's great!

Cold_Blooded_AngelCold_Blooded_Angelalmost 12 years ago

hey, please do another!! I loved it! xox

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice Zombie yarn..

This reminded me alot of World War Z. Same realistic semi-documentary feeling.

Keep it up. wouldn't mind reading a second part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
the rest

I liked it. There were a few spelling errors, but i liked it. you did a good job. If it was filled out a little bit more and you had part 2 then 3 you could have a book easily. I would buy it and read it over and over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more?

Will you write a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I think you should have made it so you can continue this story it is very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
you got a winner

there is really not much to say but WOW

GomerbileGomerbileabout 15 years ago
Loved It

Great story! Anxiously awaiting more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
GREAT!

you can't just leave this hanging, gotta finish it! with a lot of chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
very nice!

interesting.Keep at it :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
well written and intriguing...

the story is well written and builds the suspense u were looking to build. your herione is also very interesting and i can't help but feel it was too short as i would love to read what happens next! great story!

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There's not much to tell. I've been writing different works, serious and silly, erotic and political, for the past decade. I enjoy reading and writing and I think there is nothing greater then to connect mentally and intellectually with the people that read my work. If yo...