All Comments on 'Blessed Ch. 03: Love and Classes'

When I saw this was the third chapter, I couldn't remember if I had read anything.

So I read them all, you are good. Humour and sex, not forgetting the character development.

I look forward to the next chapter..

Dang. Sharing in a Harem story is a no go for me. Such a shame, I was really enjoying it so far.

Amazing. Keep it up!

Really nice!

Really nice!

A very good story. I have read all three chapters and am impressed. You developed your characters and made them interesting. You write a good backdrop story and I appreciate that the sex adds to the story, not just thrown in. I look forward to more chapters as you have my attention. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Other than preferring a bit more possessiveness in the male protagonist of harem stories (i.e. wants to be the only male), I like this story very much so far. I wait impatiently for inspiration to bring you back to it.

Thank you for sharing it.

While I'm not a fan of sharing, myself, I agree that if you set the rules for your story/world, sticking too them is a legitimate argument. Suspension of disbelief will carry you a ways, but consistency and believability will take you farther.

The only real question in my mind at this point is, what's the birth control logic in this one? Can the species interbreed? Is there a herb/spell being used? Or is the explanation just "Magic" and leave it at that? I assume the pregnancy discussion will come up at some point, given that your MC is the chosen of a fertility goddess.

A harem MC whose entire cock fits in an elf's mouth? Kinda weak and feeds into the whole sharing concern imo.