All Comments on 'Blood of a Virgin'

The last part seemed rush..

whens part 2

A bit on the conventional side of vampires. Much more animal than human. But remember, strange can be intoxicating, but for a story to really grab readers, they have to be able to "merge" with at least one of the characters (usually "the" character if writing in first person), so that character has to be and stay human, and overcome something to achieve something.

The beginning was compelling, but the ending tampered off such that we are left with nothing. It was straight through to the end, no twists or turns.