All Comments on 'Bloodline For Castlefield'

Wrong category

I don't think it belongs in the gay section.

Wrong category and in need of a serious edit. I appreciate that a person spends time writing a story but the whole thing is spoiled by numerous punctuation and grammar mistakes...

Not only is this in the wrong category, it barely qualifies as erotic. A marriage based on this much familial deception is doomed regardless. The only added element is that the child will now have to deal with divorced parents.

Good stuff. Is there a part 2?

Really good can’t wait for more

Good and like how the story goes.

That's hot when she plays with beard, lip.

So good you need to write more!!

Is there anymore story on Andy??

This is in the wrong category