All Comments on 'Blooming'

Short and sweet. Great idea for a longer story.

Nice beginning work. Very promising!

Get an editor or five. This was horrible, typical black or cuck content for a rookie, but still horrible.

Great storyline...your grammar sucks!

As the troll mentioned below, there were issues with grammar, typos, etc; make sure you edit future stories. However, props for writing it, and don't worry about the haters, your writing will get better the more you practice.

totally confusing. also rapey stuff should always be dialed back to being merely "reluctant."

What the fuck was that?

A reader can tell that you were getting aroused writing this, a little slip here and there, which is awesome. Just try reading your piece before you send it in. But keep writing!!!