Blooming Flower Ch. 01 - The Cabin

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Tom let go and shuddered inside her as Daisy bounced up and down on him, moaning till she reached her peak. "Oh God. Oh fuck Yes".

Leo watched on while Tom filled her and she smiled through the orgasm on top of him. It was everything he wanted. He knew he might like it, but never this much. It was pretty clear that Daisy was enjoying her adventure too. She slowly moved off and sat next to Tom on the sofa, she kissed him and headed for the bathroom.

"If you ever want to do that again, let me know." Tom said as she moved out of site.

"Oh, I will. Don't worry about that" Daisy said.

Tom, pulled back on his trousers as she watched Daisy walk out of site.

"As long as you're okay with that Leo."

"Sure, she seemed to enjoy it." Leo responded.

Before Daisy returned, he was gone. Leo had made sure that he had her number as he left. She walked out of the shower in her towel and sat on the sofa where Leo had now sat. She sighed heavily as she leaned against him.

"that. was. goooood" She said to Leo. "Did you enjoy it too?"

"Oh yeah. You looked so good taking his dick." Leo responded. "You want to have a second tonight?"

"Hummm. I think I'm good." She teased. "I know you want me, but, not letting you have me will drive you mad."

"Not fair." Leo laughed.

"Yeah, that's why you love it!" She giggled.

Leo knew it wasn't going to be the last time that he would let Daisy have some fun. It seemed that she was ready to have a few adventures of her own.

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IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 3 years ago

Only two mistakes... 1) after they finished she asked her husband about doing it again..his reply should have included...as long as I'm included and can watch..nothing separate behind my back 2) He just shared his wife and allowed her to have a super hot erotic fuck..he was horny and she told him no.. he could have sex he had to wait...well fuck that shit.. after what he just did for her he should not even ask..just take her and NEVER EVER take no for an answer..she's a bitch for treating hubby that way and he should have reclaimed her regardless of what she said..he deserved it !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Not bad for a first effort

I know it’s hard for a new author to slow down and develops a sense of pace for a story. Usually first timers tend to have the entire story already in their head and rush to get to the conclusion. But those who have been writing for a while understand that you begin the story with a small idea, and let the story take you where it does. I’m sure that each story after this began to grow and take on a life of their own. Hopefully you will continue to write and post new adventures. Having someone read over the story prior to posting will always catch little mistakes you may have missed. And then you read it over to yourself and see if the story reveals new details to you that may need to be added.

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Hey,

As a first time author it's great to get feedback. Thanks for spending the time to tell me what you think.

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