All Comments on 'Blowjob doesn't count!'

My eyes hate my brain and I didn't even read it all. I need a thesaurus for all the words I want to describe how utterly horrible this travesty of words is. I'm not calling it a story. This is barely an idea. It would give you too much credit to say that you got this down during a morning jerk and you weren't awake yet. Sadly I honestly believe fucking AI could do better. And that's terrifying.

It’s a good idea, but you should rework it with the help of an editor, to fix some of the language, grammar, and world building problems. The story itself is fine. A good effort. I give it 5/5 for concept.