All Comments on 'Blue Moon Rising'

All the characters are a lot of fun. Can't wait to see more. For some reason, I'd love to see Libby dragged in to this. Looking forward to more.

This was a different twist. Perhaps, unlike the other comment made, the only way for Libby to be dragged into this would be is she ended up with Aiden. But than now I dont know how i feel about one part. That part that Kate will be aging (looking older and older) while he stays the same. Perhaps he could bite kate?

looking forward to more.

A very enjoyable and well-written story. I always like it when writers use short snappy dialogue instead of lines and lines of narrative to move a story forward. For a first submission, this looks very professional. Although you/the author lost the first person POV and changed to 3rd person POV in 2 instances near the end of the story.

short, and sweet, and to the point, yet long enough to full you up till you get to the end! doing great so far :] don't keep us waiting to long. can't wiat for the next chapter!

You can't leave it there! You can't! :D

Maybe Ian can start aging like a human once he and Kate mate permanently.

This chapter moved pretty quickly, so I wasn't sure if it was meant to be a series or a stand alone. Since it is a series, you could take your time with each chapter and let us get to know that characters and the situation a bit better. Detail is good. Also, it would be helpful if you label the chapters as Ch 1 etc to avoid confusion. I enjoyed it though. Thanks for writing.

love the tight style of writing and sense of humor ..

do we have to wait until the next blue moon to rise before we are treated to part 2 ..? ;)

I hope you continue, I really enjoyed this story and the tension you have created is nicely done.

thought I would just skim yet another werewolf story but then I couldn't stop reading. Amazing descriptions, great flow, so hot my PC almost melted. Only one problem. I want more!

Please keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice and innocent