All Comments on 'Bobbie Ch. 01'

You really don't like women, do you?

Yeah, but I just like to fuck with you.

Holy hell thats hot lol

fantastic story, keep it coming bro !!!!

Dude. That was downright impressive. I think the slip to the darkside was a little quick, but I was truly impressed.

If you’d used all the right tags I wouldn’t have read this, ‘watersports’ is just not something I want to read, just gross. I quit reading at that point. It was definitely the final straw for me as I’m not a fan of extreme verbal humiliation, I just put that down to my low self esteem. In a sexual context “talking dirty” can be a huge turn on, outside of sex it’s just a demeaning turn off. On a personal level I don’t really get why the skin colour is meant to be such a big deal. What I got from this story (before it turned gross) is that she’s sexually submissive which given her character’s background is hardly surprising.

Obviously I understand that some people have what’s generally known as “racist“ opinions but given the fact that we’re all human it’s not something that I’d consider as taboo. I don’t think this story is for me even without the watersports the improbable contortionist behaviour kinda stretched the suspension of disbelief too much.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)

A bit on the dark side, but a good one as long as it remains fiction. Don't mind the haters.

wish my wife would go for that