All Comments on 'Bobbing for Dildos'

by meathead96

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Athena_e19Athena_e19over 13 years ago
Leaving Reader's Frustrated

Wow... Started out with such a novel story line and progressed neatly to..... To where? It seems like we missed out at the end. I thought the bobbing was the wind up, not the climax

Marcella_MinxMarcella_Minxover 13 years ago

Really well written, but I felt I wanted more! I wanted to hear how the other characters that you had built up got on, and for it to go on a bit longer. Shame cause I was really getting into it!

KamattlockKamattlockover 13 years ago
Where's the rest

Nice start to a novel story idea just wish it didn't just end with only Trish having an orgasm what about the other party goers?

meathead96meathead96over 13 years agoAuthor
DIdn't mean to frustrate anyone!

Since the outcry for more of the story, I'm working hard on part number 2. Will have it posted as quick as possible! Thanks for reading and voting!

sirhugssirhugsover 13 years ago
good job

but shouldn't the guys have to bob too?

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 13 years ago
Pretty Good

The name of the story is intriguing, but the idea of a swinging party, with partners chosen by chance is not a new one. At the same time, the method of selecting partners is novel, although I can't help thinking a committed couple, if there was one at the party, would not have been willing to switch like that. All in all, a good read.

AmitdankevinAmitdankevinover 13 years ago

That was a really nice story. Some of the stories are very good and different from others and this was one such story. Hope you will finish the second part soon. And, Good luck for contest.

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