by AdamRip
Nice try at ridding the story of the obvious blackmail from Chapter #1. If we hadn't needed to go back and reread that first to understand what was going on in chapter #2, it might have worked. Actually, even without blackmail, Bobby still doesn't come off much better. He still a selfish lover, receiving BJs without offering anything in return. All that being said, this was still a well written story, it just has a somewhat unlikable character. MLF
Yes, an attempt at blackmail was erased but Bobby still took a non-consensual pic and had the shitty gall to be looking at it in his bud’s presence and getting all horny. Then he attempted to excuse the pic, seems to try to gaslight his bud about “liking it and wanting to do it again”. Bobby eventually admitted he liked it and wanted it but in a kinda dickish toxic masc sort of “yea suck my dick again” sort of way. Bottom line, Bobby does not come across thoughtful, caring, reciprocal in any way. If these two have been friends for a long-time I suspect Bobby has then always been a kind of selfish, taker not giver, unbalanced sort of friend. If this story became a mutual exchange of two buddies giving and receiving equal pleasure then it would be hot. But as is it’s a flat “I’ll do you a favor by letting you suck me” boring tale.
Who gives a shit? It's a fake story
Just skim past it/pretend it didn't happen if you think it's hotter without it
I for one liked it. Yes there is a power imbalance but both guys got pleasure. Would like to see a part 3.
I have to agree with everyone about Bobby being a selfish ass with his “Yeah suck my cock” attitude.