All Comments on 'Bobby-Jack'

by TAHammer

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great scenario!

I like the idea of two old school friends coming back together and exploring their relationship as adults. This is nicely written too. Looking forward to more!

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrabout 4 years ago
Great Start

You have a great start to what I hope will be a wonderful story. Thanks!

PissdrinkerPissdrinkerabout 4 years ago
Mills and Boon

Please make the follow up some decent cock sucking, guy fucking, believable sex fest and not undying love and romance. I'm partial to a bit of ginge myself.

lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAabout 4 years ago
Why stop it there?! OMG

Now that was good read! I could finish writing that for you.. :O)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

This is a well written story. I’m looking forward to the next one. I met up with a high school friend 20 years later and had a few great months together.

timesquaretimesquareabout 4 years ago
It really happened to me.

Easy reading and enjoyable. Please keep writing and continue with the store.

jehu47jehu47about 4 years ago
do at least one sequel

Nice start to what I hope I more.

BlowPopJBlowPopJabout 4 years ago
The rest

Where's the rest of it??!!! *pouts*

buzzie1969buzzie1969about 4 years ago
awesome set up

hope you write more...great set up and cliff hanger

63lsmith63lsmithabout 4 years ago
NICE

A great start to what I hope will develop into a great story. This was a good place to stop.

TAHammerTAHammerabout 4 years agoAuthor
It was a cliffhanger, ya'll.

I started the next installment yesterday. Comments and feedback, as well as voting, are great ways to let a author know what to do with story lines and sequels/installments --I LOVE reader responses to my work. This story was originally planned as a three-story arc, but I might expand it now. Be sure to keep the comments and feedback coming, and check out my other stories. Stay in touch! --Thomas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
YAAASSSS

Wherever this leads, I AM READY. I hope these becomes one of those 22 chapter stuff because Im down knowing this would be a good read

sztamfatersztamfaterabout 4 years ago
Part 2 please!

Make a part 2 please. that cliff hanger got me hooked. The Plot is also amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Keep up the good work!

You are a talented writer. You’ve got me hooked

RobJasperRobJasperalmost 4 years ago
Great story!

Great story with nice buildup and physical descriptions! Thanks for writing and I will be reading more!

AlexpaulAlexpaulalmost 3 years ago

I taught you were going to leave me hanging until I saw chapter 2. Saved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story has the ingredients of a life-changing duet of 2 great guys.

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Thomas A Hammer, writing on Literotica as "TAHammer" Living out in the country and writing stories of all kinds. I'm beginning to hesitate calling what I write here "erotica", preferring to call it "explicit gay (and/or bisexual) adult fiction" as some of my writing might b...

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