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All Comments on 'Boob Feast Ch. 01'

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 8 years ago
Let me make sure I've got this straight.

This story was posted AFTER it was edited? I'd hate to have tried to read it BEFORE it was "edited". In a word? Terrible.

gordo12gordo12over 8 years ago
Couldn't agree more

I can't imagine how bad it was BEFORE the "editing" to have ended up so bad AFTER.

(-1,000,000 *'s)

Really, there is no writing or editing talent here at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Needs Improvement

The overall story can be good but the way it is presented, it feels like you are writing a summary report and not a story for literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Normally I dont bother with a remark if i see ones with which I agree but....

Never seen this author before and I was happy to look but...I see other stories from him and I will go look now. Hoping they got a bit more storytelling.

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