All Comments on 'Book Lover'

by talynkotr

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SwedeqSwedeqabout 17 years ago
Good Start.......

Taly, Nice beginning. This story seems to beg that more needs telling....so where is the rest of it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Both Win!

I realize that when one makes a book out of a 'short piece' that the author and the reader both run the risk of losing the spirit and intent of the story in the wealth of 'things you never wanted to share or hear about'. But with some thought and perserverance, this could easily turn into a novella at the very least. And I especially love the part at the end 'where they both win'. As it is with most erotic stories, there is a winner--and a victim. I was gratified to see this wasn't the case here.

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