All Comments on 'Book of Spells Ch. 03 - Fire and Blood'

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grumpydopegrumpydope6 months ago

Very well written. Please continue writing. Can't wait until the next episode is posted.

lassidor1lassidor16 months ago

far too long between chapters couldn't remember the story

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great story so far! I really can’t stand Alex. I find him to be a very annoying character with how much he blames the others for the deaths as though they should have somehow known a book could do what it did, or that magic spells were real.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

good story, well written. For some students abroad they make a little too much drama, especially Alex. Endless whining but not going, then demonstrative accusing playing the making up his whining with aggression. Stow the book away and appreciate what you got from it as long you can. But, the girl had not used the spell and even wasen't even in the room - so how does the spell relate to her, but draw some random people into accidents or madness? Will their dicks (Chris & Jason) keep getting bigger as same with the tits of Maggie? Or is it only Blood-related in parts?

So while the story is still in the beginning, i would like to see it going on. There can be many possibilities.. if not, gimme that book. 😄 most people care only for their own good and don't care about the price for others.. someone is ever the looser, just make sure it's not you. In this case, i could imagine many ways of dark humor or splatter/gore this story could continue. Thank you for publishing

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