by Samuelx
Fully lame. 90% bullshit filler for 1 measley paragraph about the subject. Stay on topic!!!
sorry but i agree with the previous comment.. you can't just have a few sentences about the subject at hand proceeded by alot of info about the characters. If your going to do that then dont have any sex in it and put it in a different catagory with no sexual content... try again
i agree with the other comments. there was a lot of buildup for a few sentences of erotic daydreaming