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VioletOrchid85VioletOrchid854 months agoAuthor

This is the chapter 2 rewrite/edit.

Overall the main change is a section of the story was removed and then accompanying sections rewritten. Other than that, the overall flow should be better.

Hope you enjoy.

P.S next I will be writing the chapter 2-3 Interlude.

coolmonkey24coolmonkey244 months ago

Always happy to see an update. I would recommend adding "alien" or "aliens" to the tags, just my 2 cents.

VioletOrchid85VioletOrchid854 months agoAuthor

I'll have to remember to do that going forward, only way I can think of doing it to approved stories is resubmitting them.

3956943956944 months ago

Awesome story I'm looking forward to the next chapter keep up the good work.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShades2 months ago

Enjoying the story. On to the next chapter. Thanks for your writing.

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I am a male author from the UK. My favourite genres are Fantasy and Science Fiction. Border Station Five is the rewrite/edit of what I have written so far of A Viper's Nest. The reading order for Border Station Five is Ch.01, Dear Diary, Ch.02. Going forward I will make su...