All Comments on 'Bored Fran Ch. 02'

but this is going to be until Christmas at this rate. To short and more info about hubby and why her life was boring would help. Hubby comes off as a wimp at first, I think that he is a man that just got tired of asking and being turned down all the time. No one wants to really rape his wife unless it agreed upon ahead of time that this is a good practice.

Continue it soon ;)

Certainly holding my interest.

Now she is hot and very horny. How will she sleep?

Your female character begs to be dominated. But in the process of maintaining a marriage and raising two children, successfully, her true personality never came out? Just not realistic. And he just accepts her new behavior without any scrutiny or questioning? Unreal, or these two people are too stupid to be married, at least to anyone else.

For the read.

At times things just suddenly stop when there could be more detail. The beauty of this site is that you don’t have to have a Phd in literature to write. This is a fantasy and I am enjoying filling in some of the blanks. At the moment a short read suits me just fine. When I am after a longer, more detailed read I will go to another author.

Thanks for having the guts to contribute.

Bored whore.