All Comments on 'Boredom Pt. 02'

Hey I’m all in favor of people trying new things, but please work on your grammar, it’s like your using a translator service and don’t actually speak any English yourself. From mispelled words to improper tense agreement, to just straight up bed wording. I didn’t even want to read to the end because of it.

Your apparently don't know the answer.

Less is more. A beautiful piece of writing.

Please keep this story going! It is a great beginning to what could be an amazing story.

Just......wow! That's really all I got. Wow! Please write more because you are really good! Thank you!

I liked your story and hope you continue with the story.

Thanks and stay hot. Looking forward to more of your story!