by Avicia
Loved the first three chapters and so look forward to many more. Great story telling with a entertaining plot and well developed characters. Enjoyable to read. Thanks for you pr time to write and published. 5 Stars. Cheers
This is my favorite chapter by far. I really like the way you developed the Extraordinary Talent aspect of this story. Erin is a well developed and sympathetic character that I found myself rooting.
I'm loving this story. This is such a well-developed and believably human main character. A rare thing here on Lit, especially in this genre. I salute your Art.