All Comments on 'Bought or Rescued? Pt. 03'

by Avicia

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Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Great Characters and Well Written

Loved the first three chapters and so look forward to many more. Great story telling with a entertaining plot and well developed characters. Enjoyable to read. Thanks for you pr time to write and published. 5 Stars. Cheers

MrSmith27MrSmith27almost 2 years ago

This is my favorite chapter by far. I really like the way you developed the Extraordinary Talent aspect of this story. Erin is a well developed and sympathetic character that I found myself rooting.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 2 years ago

I'm loving this story. This is such a well-developed and believably human main character. A rare thing here on Lit, especially in this genre. I salute your Art.

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I am no longer writing for Lit, instead I am working with Gortmundy to help prepare his magnum opus ‘The Tattooed Woman’ for publication and working on finishing my sci-fi novel, Kyrielle. If anyone is interested in being a beta reader for Kyrielle please let me know. The fir...

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