by realbadboi
Hot story, but felt the the ending was a bit flat.. could have used a bit more
Wrong place should be in fetish,
He asked for the bondage, fucking and spanking.
The story was pretty decent, but I agree with the other commentators in that the story shouldn't be labeled non-consensual. Also, while I don't like to be critical of grammatical, spelling and word choice errors in stories written by authors who don't have English as their first language (as I'm guessing is the case here), the frequency of the errors in this story were really distracting and made it considerably less enjoyable as a result.