All Comments on 'Boy Toy'

standard fantasy, but well written and highly erotic. Will there be other lessons that you describe?

Very hot! My dick was rock hard and I came like Vesuvius.

What happened to "remember, i am sandra"?

Verry well written though!

Amazing story! Would love to see more like this!

One place she has short hair, then long. He takes his shoes off to be bare-footed, then later she takes his socks off. Good story - check the little details.

so hot plz make a sequel

Amazing story, we definitely need a sequel, or two. :-)

Nice premise.

Nicely paced.

Sex is a bit too automatic. Needed more foreplay/teasing. Needed dialog about how often he masturbated. Did he watch porn? What kind? What actions in the porn videos took him over the top? Did he imagine himself doing (and having done to him) what he saw in the videos? What in particular?

Did he masturbate last night after his session with Elizabeth? How many times? Was it good?

Despite criticism, five stars.

If only I had a couple teachers of this kind at Brian's age!

Some silly mistakes that could have been avoided if you had re-read it and used something like Google.

"You fell that?" Felt.

"Wala no pants."

"voila"

/vwʌˈlɑː/

Learn to pronounce

exclamation

there it is; there you are.

"‘Voila!’ she said, producing a pair of strappy white sandals"

Nice try though.