All Comments on 'Bra Fitting - Threesome Fantasy'

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DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 4 years ago
Fun and different

Very enjoyable. keep writing, luv!

xoxo,

Di

briefloverbriefloverabout 4 years ago
Loved it, please continue

Thank you. Great stories. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's an interesting story but you should get it proofread and you need to pay attention to the pronouns.

Phrases such as "her and I" and "mine and Katrina's" are wrong and sound awful.

bralover222bralover222over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the kind feedback and the constructive criticism.

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