All Comments on 'Brad's Sister Pt. 02'

You have made it to short. One page isn't worth reading you need to write or post at least 2 or 3 pages at a time. To many writers write or post one page and it's not enough.

Unfortunately, I have already submitted the next part, so it'll be about the same length. I will however, after that, make the postings two or three times as long.

I agree it's short, but still erotic. Dick

Again, nice work on this piece!

Very well done. All of them. Like the long, slow buildup