All Comments on 'Brad's Sister Pt. 02'

Very well done. All of them. Like the long, slow buildup

Again, nice work on this piece!

I agree it's short, but still erotic. Dick

Unfortunately, I have already submitted the next part, so it'll be about the same length. I will however, after that, make the postings two or three times as long.

You have made it to short. One page isn't worth reading you need to write or post at least 2 or 3 pages at a time. To many writers write or post one page and it's not enough.