All Comments on 'Brain Games Ch. 17'

by PriestOfIshtar

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BruceWoBruceWoalmost 3 years ago

This story keeps getting better.

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFakealmost 3 years ago

That was fantastic, and you are really doing a great job of world building.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I’m done. This was interesting for a while and now it isn’t.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is getting deeper and deeper but you explained it so that it is understandable for the most part and a brilliant premise. I can’t imagine Enkins has no clue that something is different but I do look forward to seeing what both he says/does as well as the Goddess. The Spider is a strange possible outside influence but I guess that also has to be determined. I am seriously into all this and have been enjoying it more and more. Thank you for giving me something to be able to mindlessly think about which is a great way to help ignore some of life’s stresses.

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