All Comments on 'Brandi Ch. 03-04'

Still too short,my earlier comments still apply.

Is there any more or is that it??

Yep Tags would REALLY have been appreciated. DD:LG is a hard no for me.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

there is a lot more coming, the story is over 100 pages in total, just currently searching for an editor for the rest to pass for arrovals