All Comments on 'Breaking And Entering With Steele Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This story get crazier with each page and I can't get enough! hahahaha Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

The step mom and the dad are crazy he needs to get out fast, the step sister does need mental institution help……. To reverse the damage caused by the mother

redlion75redlion756 months ago

Can't stand for an almost 30yr old man to call a parent mommy like a 5yr old

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Why do I have the feeling this will not end well for Abbey.

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

What did they do to Candice in that room? His father is a POS and Melody is not far behind.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

3 days? 3 days? Sister disappeared and evidence with it. These are not parents. They are predators.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

keep going, this has the potential to be a world beater. Add in the girlfriend, Melody and Candace and a whole bunch more so that he has his own harem

YaBoiBigChungus7YaBoiBigChungus76 months ago

This story has parts that are so good but the step sister disappeared and was seemingly bound and raped by the dad? Wtf is going on?

ScottishTexanScottishTexan6 months ago

I hate Melody. She's absolutely psycho bitch and a control freak. But I'm totally in love with Abbey. With the exception of the piercings, which is honestly a turn OFF for me, Abbey reminds me a lot of my second wife during the time we were dating right after we met. 3/5

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Aspiring writer, creator, professional liar. A note for those who read my works. My text editor is as good as I can afford. I write as a hobby. I have a number of books in the works and I hope to become a professional writer with any luck. I thank you all for your comments. La...