All Comments on 'Breaking & Training a Man Ch. 02'

I've given this five stars for its erotic power. The sex action has a real sense of the author's lust behind it. There's ingenuity in places, so that the reader doesn't quite know what's coming next. However, it has technical weaknesses - in particular, the tense fluctuates - and the language could be more vivid. If you feel you need an editor, I'd like to volunteer. Please do keep writing.

loving it so far hope you continue bdsmtrainer88

Great story

As he finished dressing, he took the short handled fireman’s axe out the special inside pocket of his jacket, turned, so that he could see her face & the terror in her eyes and proceeded to slowly and methodically, chop her hands off.

Fine until the forced urine drinking. Disgusting, not erotic at all.

Nicely written, every hubby should be broken in and trained to be a wife's play toy, then shared with friends-)

If a man did this to a woman it would be an episode of Criminal Minds or Law and Order SVU

Same comment as previous chapter:

I loved the story and yes some of it was a little out there, but hey it's fiction.

My only minor complaint is the grammer and some wrong tenses and pronouns. I think a rereading before publishing or asking an editor to review woud have made it perfect, or course i did give it a 5* any way.

You need a proof reader