All Comments on 'Breaking Her In'

It is always the same the same phrases, attitudes. Man Meat unless you count a cannibal.

ow

this story was great. you know, generally this stuff doesn't happen in a strip joint, but then again for $500 why wouldn't it? plus how can you hate the ending.

the author apparently has some issues with being respectful to women - yes, even strippers. Too bad, about the first half was looking like a decent story. Could have been a great story - was going that direction, then, whammy, the guy turns asshole. Why??

Part 2: Ashley rats out Frank to his wife then takes the $500 and hires a goon to beat the crap out of him. Does anyone really get off on such abuse of women?

**You had the making of a neat little story. Until you went all Neanderthal!!!