All Comments on 'Breaking Jane Ch. 03'

Just caught all up with this story. Its very good, I love these kind stories, strong man and a solid character for the woman too. Thanks.

The longer this story goes on, the better it gets. I am so enjoying it, and for me it can run and run...thank you.

Yes, this is just what I need. I have been reading a bunch of mediocre stories lately in search of the next "big one". I think you are the "big one", no pun intended. Please continue this. Don't rush it---it seems like it was a bit rushed in the overall plot, but the intensity of James makes it less noticeable. Pace yourself. There are some that will say "no, we want more now!!!!" I want more too, much more, but I understand the value in authors that take their time. The results are always amazing. I just hope that "amazing" doesn't take more than a week. LOL. I can always hope. I can't wait until James gets even meaner and dirtier. Yumyumyum!!!

Off to a great start so far through the first 3 chapters. Nice pace, character development, and enjoyable along with being plausible so far. Jane's character is great thus far. Looking forward to your next chapter of the saga. Thanks!!!

I like your story a lot... but it feels a bit rushed,, it is great yes! just pace yourself.... Jane,, the way you presented her.. is very independant and stuborn I just don´t get how can she brake so fast.... thanks for posting so fast.

Yes, I agree, it is a bit rushed but it is very well written from a woman's point of view. (Tyraid should be tirade)

I have never wound up after a third chapter of any story and given it all a 5 but this time I did.