All Comments on 'Breaking Jane'

PLEASE get a good proofreader.....and do NOT rely on your spellcheck....

Excellent groundwork....allows for MANY possibilities....just enough to leave the reader wanting SO much more...

Looking forward to page 2....

I love the story premise, but editing is definitely needed.

Can't wait to read more.

Forget a proof reader just keep subsequent chapters coming as I am looking forward to a great story.

Love these type of stories the big bad billionaire and the shy trusting assistant. Please keep it going.

I want more of Mr. Caldwell !!! Him and his sexy British accent!! Keep going cause I can't wait to see what tasks the boss will need of Ms. Lambert to do!!

Can't wait for more.

I will be posting chapter 2 today so look out for it!! I don't have a computer so I post from my phone mostly so sorry for the typos I didn't comb through the first chapter!!

No wonder there were typos. Sheesh. I'm sure you know you need to get a laptop. If you don't have the funds right now, get an editor, and sell your work. That will get you a laptop. Looking forward to more!

It doesn't matter if there are typos I am sure author does not post for people to comment on the mistakes. There aren't enough that it takes away from how well written it is. It is rude to assume she cannt afford a laptop ever take into considerationshe writes while she's away from home?? If you're going to comment simply comment on her work!! Anyway excellent job keep the chapters coming and bravo typing all of this out with a cell phone!!

This isn't horrible, but it's definitely not fresh. This is a straightforward presentation of a tied & true theme. I was looking for just a bit of a twist in the not unfamiliar discouse.

The narrator is way too bland to be first in class in Ivy League school. This doesn't mean she has to be jaded, but please! You don't get to the top of the heap without clambering over a few bodies.. 75 k and bennies is fantastic for average grad but for Ivy league honors grad- that's less then average. I hope in next chapter -,things step up.

Loving the story so far ... has all the ear marks of a good read!

As some others have mentioned the typos really are a bit distracting lol but that's nothing that can't be fixed!