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Sailor59Sailor59about 1 month ago

Great opening, I could visualize the characters and the environment from their descriptions. Easy to read and as good as other major sci Fi/fantasy authors I've read.

StillStunnedStillStunnedabout 1 month ago

I really enjoyed this one. Good concept, and well executed.

yesterdaysyesterdaysabout 1 month ago

Excellent story so far. Quite vivid—and sometimes amusing! 5 stars.

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May 11 Update: 'Fires Upon the Desert,' the first entry to my sequel to 'Drowning at Dusk' is up. This features a new main character in a new part of the setting, and is thus an easy entry point for new readers. While reading the original installment will give you the most co...

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