All Comments on 'Breathtaking'

Interesting chain of events. Role playing for now but maybe for real in the future.

Give us lots of juicy details when the swap starts.

Nice beginning. Let us hear more?

A safe start! A clear case of an Adventurous Wife being ‘Loving’ within her marital relationship. It is promising that Sweetie has implicated Hubby as an adulterer, then later herself as an adulteress! Hubby is to be commended for sneaking Frank with Sweetie into her role-play. It would have been hotter if Frank had previously been depicted as, NOT Carol’s* Hubby but, a player-hunk who she had admitted has flirted with her! Looking forwards to subsequent chapters, and thanks for mentioning that!

5*

* Frank was only depicted as a mutual acquaintance, probably C’s SigOther.

a good start

I want Ch2

Can't wait for the next part! Loved it. 5 stars. chapter #2 please

Definitely wanting the next chapter