by sexgundam666
This is phenomenally hot, definitely a new favorite. The growth, the cartoonish size, the way her home life adapted to her body and treats it like normal, so hot. I noticed an abnormally large number of typos and missing words, which makes me suspect this was written in a rushing burst of passion and I love it. If you do an update and clean-up pass, I suggest adding some more concrete descriptions of Kylie's sizes at various points, particularly that final growth surge at the end. For instance, I had no idea how huge her cock was as Janice walked down its length, I just knew that any answer to that question would be incredibly sexy.
This is so HOT!!! It doesn't help that i love the idea of getting bred too!
Admittedly the size thing gets a bit... confusing. I'm half sure I didn't read it right! I wonder if there's such thing as too much of a size difference? Still I didn't just suspend disbelief I threw it in the mail and shipped it to the moon...
A really great story.