All Comments on 'Breeding my Sister's Wife Ch. 02'

I am enjoying this story but I have to say that trying to read transcribed text convo is bloody difficult.

good conversations

Very exciting dialogue specially for the bother and sister. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Would be nice if there’s some teasings and banters between brother and sister while the sexual insemination act is happening. Something like the sister spread her legs wide to tease her brother to get more erect to perform and the brother banters that he would be more excited if he could at least sniffs his sister’s pussy.

OK so far but need to see the next stages,

I hate reading text on my phone, made even worse here. As important as this task is, I would think at the very least a phone conversation if not in person. I guess it shows where our world is now, everything text even on Literotica.

Chapter 3 is already in the moderation cue, so stay tuned! That's where it starts getting really spicy. Thanks for your patients with the slow build, I hope you're enjoying my stories!

Kinda dragging this out... The script style dialogue is annoying and difficult to read.

can`twait for part 3.

Wow. He’s trying to be considerate and they insult him over and over. I know it’s supposed to be joking, but I didn’t see him making fun of things they might be insecure about. Way to be grateful!

Change in writing style was such that I didn’t bother to read

AAAA++

next part please

no action, but for some reason the texting was actually kind of hot....good job, but now on to the main course!!

This is a great series so far! Really well done! Even the texting with is usually done very badly

Hilarious text convos!

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OG46