All Comments on 'Breeding the Help Ch. 02'

Ok. I've finished reading and I guess the decade(?) it's been has been worth the wait.

The little 90s musical namedrops and geographical tidbits are appreciated and convey that you are trying to write something that's real and grounded, from the perspective of a young privileged dipshit expat. Because of that, I can kind of excuse the fact that he has the worldview of what people these days call an "incel".

I appreciate the direction the story is going with Carl's personality development. Although he's still an arrogant and hypocritical teen, he is actually showing latent signs of maturity.

The sex is very good too. Although Carl's superiority complex is eyeroll-inducing at times.

I do find it interesting and hilarious how he blows up when his friends start acting racist, while harbouring basically those same thought processes himself. Very realistic.

Damn, I am so invested in this two now. God they are walking along such a precipice though...

Oh what a delicious surprise. I positively loved the first chapter of this story -- perhaps my favorite on Literotica. The characters you've created are remarkable. So very real, in their desires, their actions, their humanity. It's also hard not to be a little nostalgic for the early-to-mid-1990s and for the steamy, rambunctious metropolis that was Bangkok in those days, so much more foreign and exotic than the city it's become today. I love everything about this story, but especially Carl's illicit passions, Maria's commanding sensuality, the father's half-conscious morality, and the mother's bitter narcissism, the searing socio-economic divide between the western expats and the immigrant laborers, the sweltering heat, the sumptuous food. And you've managed to top the triumph that is the first chapter with this next installment. I kept coming back to this story every so often the past few years, and I truly hope the wait won't be as long before we see chapter three. You have a great gift, and you've utterly enchanted me with this tale. More, please. More, soon!

Well worth the wait. I love it!

This is a great series, keep it up.

Only thing I’ve been waiting to hear is Maria’s age. If you could throw that in your next story, it would be much appreciated, lol

Can’t believe the second chapter dropped. Thank you. The first chapter is an all time favorite of mine that I’ve returned back to time and time again.

Super Sweet, I Believe He Said Maria Is 23.... Thanks For The Read!! 💕💞💕💞

@reeter50 on page 1 I believe it said she was 23. Correct me if I was mistaken.

Gossshhh ive been waiting for years. Got character development here. Hahahha wish u release more delicious update. Somehow the story turning wholesome 😂 not a complain tho.

god i hope he nurses from her large breasts after she gives birth. love your work

This is very interesting from the point of view of an actual Filipina. Loved it 💛

Great story. I do miss fucking exotic asian women. My time in the far East as a young Marine was the best time of my more than two year tour. Hell maybe I've got kids in Japan, Okinawa, Vietnam and the Philippines, Loved them all. Five stars for your wonderful story, can't wait for more.

Oh my gosh I love this! It's so honest about his fantasies and mindset, but there's all this growth and love and empathy. I love how he seeks to protect her and plan even with his limitations (age and independence). Even things that might be dumb, classist, or racist come across as so honest and real from his age and place. His thoughts are more asshole than his behavior and then it doesn't matter because we sense it's age and stage. And OK! I like a breeder man who's also a protector. Sexy. Looking for more.

Amazing to see this continued after all these years. I love the influence Maria has on Carl, he's not exactly likeable, but it's nice to see him begin to change. Well done!

Love it! Hoping to see how tge pregnancy plays out and how they make their relationship work, hoping there's a nice ending for Maria and Carl... with lots of kids!

This was some of the best erotica I have ever seen on this site, it was well worth the wait. I cannot wait for the next chapter where he hopefully drinks milk from her teats

On behalf of everyone who waited almost a decade for chapter 2, thank you.

I’m on edge, waiting for his parents’ reaction to the fact the lowly maid is carrying their grandchildren...