All Comments on 'Brett and Joel have a Threesome'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very hot. I hope there is a chapter 2!

VirgosunScorpiomoonVirgosunScorpiomoon8 months ago

That ending is ripe for a second chapter. A checkup if you will to see how they’re doing. I loved them.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Until it turned to guy on guy it was great as a threesome. Then it totally turned me off. Writing style was fine with a couple of problems but not enough to ruin the flow. Then the “Gayshit”. Would have been a 5 but then fell to a 2. Gave a 4 on balance.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This was so sexy! Loved it all

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