by annie78law
That ending is ripe for a second chapter. A checkup if you will to see how they’re doing. I loved them.
Until it turned to guy on guy it was great as a threesome. Then it totally turned me off. Writing style was fine with a couple of problems but not enough to ruin the flow. Then the “Gayshit”. Would have been a 5 but then fell to a 2. Gave a 4 on balance.