All Comments on 'Brett and the Succubus'

by KurtEaston

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Confusing

Trying to start but it is so disjointed with only half baked explanations. What is this with water? An obsession or fetish or something?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
You failed to communicate

I couldn't finish reading this because your writing is just so bad.

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