All Comments on 'Bright Sky Beach Ch. 01'

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jdb12399 over 2 years ago

I love this story!

Really well developed characters and situation although I was already familiar with Bright Sky Beach 1. Certainly would be a very interesting place to visit!

Very interesting to note the introduction of a choice of punishments which adds a really interesting dynamic.

I'm a big fan. Thank you!

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Love this series! Can’t wait for part 2!

Anonymous6 months ago

Thank you for writing this story. It really got me thinking about the 4th Amendment.

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