All Comments on 'Broken Wipers, Needy Wife'

Nice try but needs a lot of work, hurried ending.

hot

To be sure there's a part 2 on the way.

It’s always great to come across a slutty married woman. It’s even hotter to think that you’re sending her back to her husband full of cum & hopefully knocked up.

Good story. But I expected her to straighten up her clothes, then give him a blowjob as a "thanks". So, it does seem to be a rushed ending. I'll still give it a 5.

Agree with woodward... it was going well, but the ending was rushed. A little more story would have definitely added to it.

Ditto from me - good setup and petting scene but lacked depth to make us care. 3.4*

Canadian tire eh? I go there weekly, a smokin hot babe there is as rare as one at Walmart. It can happen but most likely a 3 dressed up as a 9. I will refer all tothe web… “ people of walmart” site, very scarry

Far too rushed.

Good, enjoyable, short story. Thanks for writing.

Things that would never happen for 500, Alex.

rocy62 is right about the skanks and worse in the walmart pics . but... at the same time some smokin hot babes of all ages are ALSO in a few of those walmart pics .

The core of LW is not just an adventurous married woman. It needs that but it is ultimately about the affect of Sweetie’s adventurous act or acts on their marital relationship. Most commonly, Hubby’s has just discovered her action(s) but not a necessary component. That does not happen (yet) in this tale.

Getting real, her initial plea and subsequent statements directed at our lucky narrator are increasingly implausible. Hope he kept it reasonably sanitary.

3*

Many friends worked the conventions in the big cities setting up the booths gor all the companies. They say it like an army of horny married woman in heat fucking with no strings and almost zero chance of getting caught. Then there is the fellow employees coming from different parts of the country . All the guys I know and two woman that always traveled for work said if your spouse travels gor work often they are definitely fucking . One who worked at a high hedge fund company said it was everyday and every employee. He had to keep his mouth shut because t we o of his close friends wives worked there before him snd one got him the job . He said they randomly fucked at least four different guys each , both fucking their direct boss and one was banging a college kid inturning . She told the other wife it’s crazy he cums six times in an hour and is the most kinky she ever had, She said first time he held her face to his belly pushing all the way in and shot down her throat on there third go of first time he was destroying her from behind, pulled her back keeping her arms up and fingers locked together behind her neck and then pushe up her ass . Once in he started talking dirty , her being stuck in that position he pounded fast hard and deep until he shot up her ass . They older guys said it wasn’t this easy and often in their 20’s, Even the sweet receptionist who talks about her family and husband like they are kings was fucking her boss and a guy who travels in from LA. The company parties and events the higher ups have contest who can fuck the most married women through the night while spouses are there not knowing. Never had this luxury when single and younger working those companies or traveling for work. Another friend had to travel to Europe twice a year for a week with his three partners . It was two guys two girls and they fucked both switching to each . Also once the four went to sex club in hungry. The Asians and Europeans loved fucking married Americans especially thinking it was their hubbies with them. Sick shit, feel bad for the unknowing husbands and wives

Cheating bitch finds full service gas station.

Thank you all for the feedback. I am trying to understand which part was rushed exactly and where I could provide more details. It honestly wasn't that long of an encounter. Waiting in that line for me to finally get out to her took longer then the rest.

Now if you refer to writing about the rest of that night, I assumed that would have been rather boring and not much of a continuous story line to tell. Anyone who has ever had a random night, especially where cheating is involved, knows that it's like finding someone who hasn't eaten in a week and taking them to an all you can eat buffet; satisfying, messy, and sometimes a little bit of steak ends up on the plate right beside some apple pie and ice cream. :)

It was hot, memorable, with a lot of moaning, a lot of orgasm, in and out and in and out, a giggle or two thrown in the mix, some embarrassing awkwardness here and there, and a morning full of regret served with breakfast. Never saw her again to know what happened with the husband.

Just a few written mistakes that proof reading would have clarified. Well done and like you have indicated a short story can be better than one that drags on and on.

Hahaha dirtball 🤮