All Comments on 'Brother from Another Mother Ch. 01'

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WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood5 months ago

Looking forward to where this story goes. Your understanding of the South, the Lost Cause, and the War of Northern Aggression sounds right. I grew up in Oklahoma with pro-Confederacy and pro-Union cousins and relatives.

Frankie1952Frankie19525 months ago

More please, love to know where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I know there will be complaints about it being short. However, this IS clearly marked as the 1st chapter, and this is a logical place for a chapter break.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I don't remember reading another story that started out with a twist like this. So many ways to go with this one.

ScottishTexanScottishTexan5 months ago

Okay, while you could reasonably end it here with the reveal, you have got to keep going with it. I hate one-page wonders, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and give you a higher score for now. 4/5

tallman441tallman4415 months ago

This is an awesome story. Someone's family is going to broken by this one. Can't wait to see how this resolves it self

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