All Comments on 'Brother Sister Mom Go on Vacation'

by lovingfeeling23

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Ruined.

RuthMRuthM5 months ago

Loved the story

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hate that they got Jason and Nicole involved. Ruined the whole series. It was awesome before that. Writers always feel the need to go too far and ruin a good story just to extend the series. Sorry I even started reading it now.

nippelfansmall2nippelfansmall25 months ago

please use proper tagging.. ' swinging ' ' sharing ' .. ruined the story! 1/5

Frankie1952Frankie19525 months ago

Fucked it up involving outsiders.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Don't worry about the negative comments. Keep writing what you want to write! Enjoyed all the different aspects each story line brought out. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Loved the story but there should have been more mother, daughter and son sex didn't care for bringing in another man for mother and the other brother and sister but still a 5

MorbidromanticMorbidromantic4 months ago

I hate incest stories with swinging and swapping. 1*.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The room on the plane was far fetched

lovingfeeling23lovingfeeling233 months agoAuthor

Believe or not those rooms actually exist!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

girl, you are kinky. I hope you enjoy in your life what your characters enjoy in your writing...

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a24 days ago

Entertaining story.

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